-A dangerous crime-

The day I got this letter was the day that I going to find out who the murderers where and why had the sent me this letter? Where the scared that I would find out that it was them? I was determined and ready to find the answers to these questions.

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That night walking around with a flash light in the crime scene where my brother’s murder had tragically happened. I walked around in that deserted dented pile of smashed car parts with the smell of burnt car tires. Suddenly a burst of light bounced of the car and straight into my eyes
“ouch, did that ever burn" I screeched
“hey who's out there" someone yapped
"I thought that I told you to stay away from here and stay out of this case"
"Well sorry but that was my brother and I think that I do have something to do with all of this"
“well whatever" he furiously yelled across the crime scene.
“I’m not leaving g! And this is my final answer there’s nothing you can do about it" I argued
What I didn't know is that this guy was doing was slowly walking toward me furiously with a bad temper what was he going to do?
"You really think that there's nothing I can do about it now?"
As he said this he was holding a hand gun harshly against the side of my head. Which really hurt by the way? I quickly took a glimpse of his face I knew exactly what he looked like know if I could only get away and tell someone.
"Who are you and why are you doing this to me?"
"I want you out of here you should have nothing to do with this"
"Why do you want me out of this?"
"Because I was the murderer and if the word gets out of you bad things will happen to you just like they did to your brother"
"I...I won't tell anyone just let me go and no one will ever hear of this"
"Ok but if it does you know what’s going to happen"
After that he sprinted towards the forest and then into the darkness I watched as he slowly disappeared.
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Soon after I got away I ran as fast as I could to get to my red hondi I knew that if I called the police it would not be safe because you never know who could be listening. After that I drove as fast as I could sometimes even speeding through the lights. I pulled into the police station, parked, jumped out of the car and dashed to the door. ****
Inside I tried to convince them that I knew who did the murder but they didn’t listen all the did was say that they would try to find the culprit I stood there wondering why they didn’t listen to me well whatever because if they weren’t then I was .
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Later at home I lie in bed listening to the annoying snore of my husband. I stared at the roof wondering if the murderer would ever find out that I tried to tell the police about him and spill my guts out. Well if the police didn’t even hear me out then the word won’t get out. Yes ok I can accually get some sleep now hope fully now that I know that nothing can happen to me.
But what I didn’t know is that that dude at the crime sceen had atachet a tracking device and that he had followed me everywhere I had went! I was wrong , big time.
I woke up to a crash down stairs probly steve again getting a mid-night snack I hope. I reached across the bed and felt for steve.. “hey honey” I whispered
“ya babe” steve said
Oh my gosh if steve was here then who was down stairs?

“hon , I gotta get down stairs something or someone is down there.”
I have got to find what that sound was or I’m never going to fall asleep.
As I walk down stairs my heart pounds a thousand times harder then usual my mind was clogged with words and random thoughts that i really didn't even know why was in there.
"hello... is anybody there?"
I walked causiously towards the livingroom when i heard my cat timmey run past the livingroom and up the stairs. i sighed in releif that that it wasn't anybody! thats what i thought butthen a deep voice came frome behind me!
"i thought i warned you not to spill the word. i told you once but now your gonna have to go and be with your brother!!" ............ not done

dream write

i never knew how dangerouse dreams untill one night when everything had changed. pphomm. the lights speedily turned off and everything went black i had no idea what was going on. all i could think of was to walk around and try to figuare out what was happening and where i was. everything was pitch black there was no scent the floor was nothing like it had been like since the lights had turned off.

all of a sudden a gigantice blob of rainbow light with tons of colouse arose from the floor and came up to about eye hight with me. after i took a good look at it i started to reach my hand out to touch that terrifiing figure that had mysteriously aroused from the ground , but before i had the chance a enormouse glowing , beautiful butterfly fluttered past me and imedily caught my attentionand watching it bonked into the ball of mysteriose light. watching it slowly sizzle into bits of dust i thought about how lucky i was that that wasn't me. not done..........

all about a stupid dude

fish.

omn nom.

what they do.

they live in water.

die if they are not.

fish walk only under water though.

they are so stupid people can catch them.

people and animals all eat fishies fried , raw.

fishies live in oceans , lakes , rivers ,fish bowls , ponds.

i want to live in a rainbow of pretty fishies

types , there are cute pretty and very humungasly ugly and pathetic.

when i think of fishies i think of lunch , FISHIES R YUMMY

COULORD FISHIES ARE THE BEST BECAUSE THEY HAVE COLOURS AND LOOK LIKE RAINBOWS.

WHILE I'M SWIMMING I'M AFRAID THAT FISHIES ARE GONNA , FOLLOW ME THEN EAT ME.

FISHIES WILL DO THAT BECAUSE YOUR TOES LOOK LIKE WORMIES LOL HA HA HA.

when i go swimming i go in a kiddie pool beacause theres no mean fishies

the fishies in the world are the sparkly fish because the arn't mean

THE FUNNY END HAHAHAHAHA

the alibi

Where were you january 4? seriously the first day back to school and now i am getting blamed for one of the biggest crimes that has ever happend to the school. i guess this is the reason that i felt so terrible about coming to school today i just knew that somthing bad was gonna happen.
"ok now anwser me where were you that night of thet crime on december 31?"
ok i will tell you but you have got to beleive me and trust that i am telling the truth. i also have friends that were with me.

" me and my friends hungout all day so if you ask me i didn't do nothing."
"so your friends were with you huh."
" ya so whats the big idea,whats wrong with that?"
"/get out get out!! hey you over there go and grab her friends and drag them here if you have to. i will do whatever i have to to get those girls to spill there guts out.".....

!! disappeared!!

Blood streams out of the bathroom as i stare deeply and sadly wondering what has happened i open the door to find my husband lying on the floor D-E-A-D dead lying in a puddle of blood with a dagar stabed into his body. i drop to the floor , pressing my face to his heart. tear drops drip down my face dripping on his dead cold dead body.

the police came quite quickly rushing to the door i open it to find a detective and two police. we walked up the spiral stair case and went to the bathroom finding that my husband had disappeared and all that was left was the dagar.

what had happened? who had done this? where has he gone? will i ever find the answers to these questions.

lying in bed that night i thought about what i would do trying to sort all these questions out and figure out if i was ever gonna forget what i had saw this day. i always thought that seeing someone dead was no big deal but when i saw was gross and i can't beleive that someone did this he had no enemy's at least i don't think that he did.....

i woke up that night to screeching car tires and a knock at my door i quickly got up and put some clothes on and sprinted dowm the spiral stair case just hoping that mabey might have something to do with my husbands murder......

!! how to play go fish !!

are you a noob , a loser , boob. do you remove your self from the world. do you pick your nose. do you live in a jail cell and want to play go fish? and have no idea how to play go fish but randomly have an urg to then this is just for you.

first you need to grab a a deck of 52 cards(and don't steal them from your mom)make sure that there are 4 of each card.

next make sure that you have 2-6 players.

after you have 2-6 people to play go fish with then you need to deal which means to give each person. atleast 8 cards.

when each person has there cards then you need to match the cards into 2 so you would match 2 aces or 2 fives together etc..

it dosn't matter if they arn't the same suit so just match the numbers and letters together


once thats done then you just have to ask other pople in your group to if they have one of the cards that you have to match them up.

when you have a pair then you put them down on the surface that your playing on. if you got the card that you wanted from the person then you have to go again.

also the you repeat the same untill you run out of the cards on the pile then when you run out of cards you say gold fish!!

who ever has the most pairs wins


hope you enjoy your game!!

!!!! mr.hayhurst!!!!!

hello i think that "MY VOICE IS GONE" is the best because it is organized and it sounds really good
it's also one of my favorite peices.
working on this peice of writing was fun and i tried to put detail and organization into it.
action and having something dramatic is my favriot part in writing.

another one of my favs is the "whats for breakfast"
it's the best beacause the writing is very detailed and was organized i was working really hard on that one and madde the corrections that i needed to make to make it the best one.
working on detail is probley the best thing i can do in writing.