hello i think that "MY VOICE IS GONE" is the best because it is organized and it sounds really good
it's also one of my favorite peices.
working on this peice of writing was fun and i tried to put detail and organization into it.
action and having something dramatic is my favriot part in writing.
another one of my favs is the "whats for breakfast"
it's the best beacause the writing is very detailed and was organized i was working really hard on that one and madde the corrections that i needed to make to make it the best one.
working on detail is probley the best thing i can do in writing.
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