Tuesday, 9 November 2010

Sentance Styles

1. a)there once was a shop keeper that was catiouse every where he went,catiouse when he walked on the street,catiouse with his money,and catiose with his house,he always looked both ways three-six times just to make sure. never took his hands off of his wallet always made sure it was there.never left the the house untill evrything was locked.but all this changed one day when.....

B)there once was a dod that was pertective of the house ,portective of his food and protective over the children,untill one day when that all changed.


2. a)One day when when it was raining harshly,scarsly,slaming and raming on the roofes of peoples houses a little girl with holes in her roof was struggling to stay alive.

b)AFTER THE RAIN HAS STOPPED!
brrrr! i-i-i don't think i can bare any longer i'm strugling,starving,and slipping to stay alive these are my last words of love .....

6a)the little girls words of faith,love,and kindness where her last!! for no one will ever even know that she has lived a hard,challenging,and rough life that she has wittnessed.

b)the

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