Tuesday, 28 September 2010

the problem with a good side. the cupcake girl.

problem: there is this cupcake that keeps on farting really really really bad ,it could sometimes knock 0ut a whole room but thats onlt when she's terrified and freaked out. and nobody wants to hang out with the cupcake. when she farts in class other cupcakes scoot away, whenever she sits at a table with someone they all get up and leave.
something positive your best friends always find a way to avoid the problem also if you want someone to leave all you have to do is fart.
negative thing. people don't like you. you can't take the bus because of the incident.
characters: the cupcake girl jessie,best friends, robber , store keeper , crowd.
conclusion:jessie ends up being one of the hosteges of a bank and she ends up being really really super duper terified and knockes out all of the robbers in the building but the others are ok.


REAL STORY

i woke up this morning thinking positive saying today's gonna be different, somthing fantastic. oh ya by the way my name is jessie and i have a farting disibility that just won't go away. i love the smell of rain and my favriate kind of food is pizza and i hate my self for the way that io fart, i have hair all the way to my butt and it's curly and i love it. i always wear make-up and my favarite colour is purple. the best date that i have been on was a walk on the beach and a pizza dinner. the one thi ng that i really hate is the sound of nails scratching on a black board. i go to mountian high middle school. i have two siblings one named cc and one named moose. when i9 go camping i love gazing at thestars in the night aspeacially when i'm with my teddy bear willi. my eyes are the colour of the bright blue sky on a sunny day when my eye twinkles it lookes like the sky and the sun combined. i love my friends. i always wear the colour purple and never any other colour. my name is jesica but every one calls me jessie. well that morning i was wrong people teased me as i walked through the streets then when i entered the school things were worse. my life had not changed and i still hated myself if there was only somethiung that could solve my problem.i have tied so many things to stop in class i keep on thinking about my problem and hope that no one can see me i just wish that somehow i could make that problem into a positive thing. after school i got together with my friends and we went to the bakery on maple street marlyn my best friend had to stop to get some bread well as we were paying "PUT YOUR HANDS UP AND BACK AWAY FROM THE CASHRAGISTER" aww i say in my head whats going on" jessie i'm to young to die said maggie. well i wish that i did die it would just solve all of my problems! well we love you so please be happy. well it's pretty hard when i have a farting disorder.'HEY YOU TO OVER THERE STOP TALKING NOW". ahh now he scares me. THE SCARY MAN PUT THE GUN TO MY HEAD AND SAID; "HEY YOU AGAIN I THOUGHT THAT I TOLD YOU TO SHUTUP! NOW LISTEN IF YOU DON'T SHUT UP I WILL KILL YOU! then i quietly wisperd now maggie that was iterly and utterly terifing i think it's coming hurry lie down before it comes. uhoh that ain't good hurry lie down i can't hold it and longer!! ahhhh "BOOOOOOOM". when the green cloud of gas finally cleared we all saw the two robbers lieing knocked out on the pail blue floor of the bakery. the baker phoned the police and then they took them away in the back of a police car. wow you saved all of our lives your... your a hero! hurray they all cheered. for the rest of that day i was being talken to by reporters now that was awsome. the next day at breakfast my mom showed me the front of the newspaper and i was a hero i made the front of actual newspaper. at school as i walked down the yellow coloured hall way kids were lined up congraguating me and shaking my hands. and then after a while all of the awsomeness got to me and i thought that this is really cool and that mabey having a disorder isn't that bad anyway.
THE END

3 comments:

  1. I really liked your story line i thought it was really clever.

    I also liked the way you discribed the main charcter of the story

    One thing you could work on is your spelling maybe you could use the spell check thing :)

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  2. Very good detail i liked how you described your character even if it was a bit creepy.

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