the building was slowly falling to peices and I was running for my young life. bam ,crash, kaboom I could feel the harsh breeze rushing past me as I went past. scared out of my mind I stoped for a few seconds just to catch my breath back. all of a sudden a gigantice rumbling ,peices flying coming down like bullets from a shot gun or a rocket falling down from the sky, theni noticed that if I didn't run then I was going to get squashed like a pancake.
I ran faster then I even knew that I could. the next thing i knew was that I was underneth a small but very very heavy peice of cement fell on the upper part of my body I felt that this was my last breath of air, my eye sight started to get blurry and my ears were my only sence I had left I heard fire trucks and police cars but then it all stoped andi could only hear my thought screaming for help. that was the last thing I could remember before i blacked out. I was so scared that I thought I would have died on the spot.
It was still black but I could hear voices calling my name. opening my eyes both the docter and my parent were in my face I jumped a little at the sight and sighed in releif that I was alright and not in that dreadfull building. I'd much rather be in this hospitle then struggling to stay alive in that building. I was about to ask what had happend but nothing had come out of my mouth. tried again but still nothing had happend!! I quickly jumped up with my eye balls poping right out of my skull, well at least thats what It felt like! looking at everyones shocked faces with my mouth open pointing trying to say that hey dose anyone under stand i can't speak dose anyone give a crap? seriosly are they stupid.
It's been at least 2 minuets finally my dad says somthing: sweetie say somthing are you hungry? my dad says annoyingly! I point to the pen and pad of paper sitting on the baige table,next to the large window, beside the typical hospitle bed with boring white bed sheets. on the paper I wrote: "I can't speak!!" oh this must be from that large peice of cement that the perimetics found on her higher part of her body! don't worry this won't harm any part of you you just won't be able to talk ever again!! I'm sure that you'll be able to find some way to communicate." says the doctor reansuringly. oh my goodness this means that this will some how affect lets just think of a few things for one 1.i won't be able to talk to my best friends.
2. I won't be able to talk in class but i'm pretty sure thats a good thing.
3. I won't be able to sas people any more.
4. how am i going to talk back to people.
the next day I tried so hard to forget that I couldn't stop it just kept on haunting me the feeling just wouldn't go away. walking down the street I wish that I had never even goten into that stupid building antway. if only there where some way..... but there wasn't and I was gonna have to live with the silence the rest of my life.
the following night,my friends all came comforting me in the and wishing that there was somthing that they could do but nothing could they. we tried everything to get our minds off of it and we sucseded but then poppy bluted it out"yay finally now we can keep our mind off of you know what" bluted poppy
oh come on are you kidding me we just forgot and then she blurted it.
when i stare at the stars i think and clear my mind so i guess the rest of my life is gonna be the same quiet and silent!
THE SILENT END
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